I spent the evening playing with Garage band (and Nina’s keyboard) and managed to create a slightly disturbing version of Twinkle Twinkle. I added it to the vision ready for Fridays crit session.
The session was fun, and it was interesting viewing and discussing peoples work (I just can’t help myself and as usual did to much talking).
My project went fine but sme questions about the start being stronger than the end, maybe I tried too hard to make an end when there isn’t realy one, maybe it is a bit soft. I sort of went for a turning off effect (different to the interference effect I had earier) more of that was the advice. Wasn’t so sure at first but it could fit in.
Sound seemed the main element in question – which is fair.
Sound comments -bring the sound up as image comes up, tie the sound more to the image include static when the image shifts, maybe go for one of those music boxes rather than the processed computer generated sound.
I like all those ideas but not shore about the static on the audio, not sure its necessary, might seemed to forced particularly if I’m going for a more honest sound.
I brought a music box, not twinkle twinkle ,(they didn’t have it) but GreenSleeves. the only one that sounded appropriate, it’s quite good, and still evokes the right mood.